Critique of the Emotional Line:
Most of the feedback was fairly positive, which was fantastic. There was a positive response to the sporadic and fast movement. The very first person to speak up actually guessed the emotion. As far as criticisms, my craft was lacking- as in the frame to frame motion was a bit choppy and could have benefited from more attention. I was impressed at how smooth some of the animations I saw were. Aside from the craft aspect, it was recommended that the portion of the line that was more calm should have been shortened in length. It lasted for too much of the video.
Some general things to keep in mind from other students' critiques:
Keep in mind that motion design relies on the buildup as much as the actual part you intend to portray.
Motion design is/can be reaction based. Make your animation have a reaction to something. Don't just have it do the thing.
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